So anyway, I'm kind of a wannabe writer and I wrote this section as part of this novel thing I've been working on (310 pages and counting, yaaayy). But I showed this tiny bit to this girl and she said it was emo! I mean, the narrator is hardly a bucket of sunshine, granted, but I really hate the description emo. And I know we MCRmy know that emos don't exist, but... can you let me know if it is... a sort of emo piece of writing?
(PS, I always write from a male POV, in case you were wondering. My female POV always ends up sounding whiny for some reason) Here goes:
I turn my eyes to hers and