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Yeah, I found this on youtube the other day, it is awesome! If any of you guys are Avenged Sevenfold fans/ The Rev fans/ Synyster Gates fans, you will love this! It's The Rev and Syn Gates their band before Avenged Sevenfold. Check it out. :)

I hate to sound like a whiny baby but I need some feedback on my short story/fanfaction! I have no idea if it's good or what. Please let me know.

CHAPTER TWO: Getting to know "Manson."

Manson entered the room like he owned the place, flashing his newly fanged teeth at me. His hair dark as night, he had dizzying blue eyes, and a gothic style that was very respected in our group.
I had known for quite a while that Manson was attracted to me... But not to the extreme of hating his best friend, Spike, for doing the same thing.
"Revengful," Manson nodded to me. "Dike," he glared at Spike. He turned his attention to Shy, calmly placing his hand on her shoulder. "Shy, would you mind doing me a favor?"
She nodded eagerly at him, she said, "Of course."
"Grab my hatchet and put it in the van for me?" He asked her, flashing his fangs yet again.
Shy skipped away happily, dragging Turbo along with her. He smiled at her with goo-goo eyes.
Me and Spoke waited until they had looped around the corner before Spike said, "How did you find out, Goth Boy?" Spike's natural charm was usually always in place, but it was not now.

WELCOME TO THE BLACK PARADE is basically one of the most inspirational songs aside from I'm Not Okay that MCR has ever done. And since I posted I'm Not Okay already, this is what I came up with.
Revengful Outcast

CHAPTER ONE: INTRODUCING THE HEROES.

It was a slow night for me, Shy, and the guys. We sat around the cemetery and told our stories next to our fallen heroes.
Our new-found hobby of saving the town from demons, rogue angels who chose a dark path, and also slaying rogue heroes who found that the darkside was better suited for them... was tiring beyond belief, but we loved it. Sure, it got to our heads sometimes, but we figured as long as we didn't go insane with what we do everyday, what's the harm?

So I wrote my first fanfiction last night, and I am going to post it after this one. Uh, I am so excited for you all to read it! If you have any questions about it, let me know. It's called Doomsday Heroes.

So I wrote my first fanfiction last night, and I am going to post it after this one. Uh, I am so excited for you all to read it! If you have any questions about it, let me know. :)

I have two or three, but this one deffinitely comes to mind!
HOUSE OF WOLVES!

Hey guys, should I make a fanfiction? I've never really considered it until now. I want it to be about angels and demons... and possibly heroes ( a MCR inspired band of heroes.) What do you think, Killjoys?!

So here we go guys! Let's do that lyric thing where everyone recites it. How about "I don't love you"