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Total Desolation Part 15

As it came to the edge of the opening I properly gripped the object and pulled it out, holding it ready for battle. Waterfall, Raven, Torture, and Fang all flinched away.
“Put that goddamned thing away! You don’t point guns at people!” Bomb yelled at me.
I smiled and lowered the rifle. “This is a gun from the Vietnam war, my great grandfather had served there. He has a bunch of old guns hidden here in this pool table, it’s what I was after. My mother had told my brother and I about them a while ago, way before Better Living took over. I wanted to get to them and see them before something happens to them, or I die.”
“Uh huh.” Bomb said, looking at me.
“You know I fucking love weapons, both old and new.”
“I know.”
“So how many guns are there hidden in this house?” Torture asked me.
“A lot, my mom had told me somewhere around 25 to 30, give or take.”
“Wow.”

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Total Desolation Part 14

When I got down there I immediately turned right to look under the stairs, there sat the paint just as I saw it earlier. I crouched down in front of the five cans that were there, I didn’t expect any crazy colors because after all these were my great grandparents, but there could be something worthwhile, that is if it was still good.

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Total Desolation Part 13

There laying on the destroyed and half eaten bed was a corpse, mostly decayed, with bones showing at parts. The clothes eaten away by moths right along with the sheets and part of the mattress. Bomb came up behind me and gasped. “What, who is that?”
I thought about, then moved closer and looked at the face to see if I could see any resemblance to someone I knew. “I think its my grandfather.”
“After all this time?”
“Well it can't be my great grandmother because she died long before any of this broke out, and I don’t think Better Living has been out here. That only leaves it to be my grandfather and judging by the corpse, he died of natural causes.”
“Well that's good I guess.”
“I guess.” We stood there staring at the corpse. “We’re going to give him a proper burial.”
“Acceptable.”
I called out to the guys who were still in the kitchen, presumably checking through the draws and such looking for things. “Hey guys, come here.”

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Hey guys I'm not sure if you noticed but my username has been changed from 13secrets to AcidicVenom. Just wanted to let you know, it is still me though haha!

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Total Desolation Part 12

She laughed as we walked out of her room and down the short hall and sat down at the kitchen table, joining the guys. I pulled out a knife and started playing with it out of habit, I played with knives a lot.
“What are you laughing at?” It was Torture.
I responded, “Oh nothing.”
“Right.”
“Does it really matter?”
“No, I guess not.”
“Exactly.”
“So what are our plans for the rest of the day?” It was Bomb again.
“For today I suggest we just chill, maybe explore the land a little more, we can make plans for tomorrow too, if you want to.”
“And what are we doing tomorrow?” That was Raven.
“Well I figured we could go out and invade a Better Living base that's close by.”
“Why?”
“I need information, I’m fine to go alone if you don’t want to come, I usually go alone anyway.”
“And stay cramped up in this little hole, I think not.”
“Thats what I figured.” I said waving my knife around. “Wheres my ninja star?” I asked, looking at Raven, he just looked at me blankly.

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Total Desolation Part 11

Or I could simply go and give myself into Better Living and live without my emotions, though they would probably rather test some new drug on me like my family. I still had to get those files and look over the new drugs they were testing, it would be best if I knew what drugs they were currently working on. This way I would know what to expect from future enemies. I would have to infiltrate another Better Living base, and it should be soon.
“Acidic Venom! Where are you!?”
I looked down to see Waterfall wondering around, calling for me. “I’m up here.” I yelled down at her.
She looked up and searched around for me, I waved my hand. “What are you doing up there!?”
“Thinking.”
“About what?”
“Stuff.”
“Whatever, come down.”
“Why?”
“Because I said so.”
“What’s your point?”
“Just come down.”
“Ugh, what are you my mother.” I muttered under my breath.
“What?”
“Nothing.” I started climbing down and in less then three minutes I was standing in front of her. “What.”

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Total Desolation Part 10

I slowed down when I saw the rocky road that lead to the place we were going and carefully started up the steep road. I was desperately hoping that my car wouldn’t hit, I wasn’t in the mood to have to figure out what would need repairing if it did hit, I wasn’t the best at repairing cars to begin with. I kept up the winding hill passing a bunch of slowly collapsing and decaying barn houses until we came to the house.
I parked my bike and hopped off, Waterfall and Torture did the same. Raven came and parked my car behind the bikes and he and Fang got out. I let out a sigh of relief when I heard that it didn’t hit, almost every time we had come up here before everything took off one of our cars would hit the rocky road.
“So where exactly are we?” It was Torture.
“Yeah, Venom, where are we?” That was Raven
I looked at Bomb, “Any guesses before I tell them? You would be the only one to know.”

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Total Desolation Volunteers?

Ok so for those of you reading Total Desolation you may be well aware that my characters are mostly made up. Well I'm to a part (a lot further then you guys are at) where I need some more characters. I would like a few volunteers to play parts in my story. I'm thinking somewhere around 3 or 4 more that I need. First come, first served, but by all means if there are already 4 ppl volunteered please put your info down as I may still use you. I need killjoy names and personalities along with appearances. Please note: if u do not give me all three I will not be able to use u in the story. You can either message me or leave a comment with all of the info. Please and thank you to all who volunteer!

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Total Desolation Part 9

I made a sudden stop when we were by the factory and caught Raven off guard as he went flying off my bike. I laughed, and parked my bike just as the other two bikes came up next to me. Torture, Bomb and Fang all started laughing when they saw Raven emerging from the bushes that he was thrown into. He had a twig stuck in his hair and leaves stuck to him and he was covered in dirt.
“What the hell was that for!?”
“I told you the question was whether you could stay on or not.”
“So you purposely went from 130 mph to zero in a matter of seconds!?”
“I do that all the time, and yet I’ve never fallen off.”
“Next time we ride together I’m driving.”
“Not on my bike you’re not.”
“To hell with that.”
“Learn to hold on.”
“Oh I will after this little stunt.” He said, dusting himself off. I just laughed.

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Total Desolation Part 8

I felt something tugging on my arm before I blacked out but knew it wouldn’t make a difference, I was already dead.
I coughed up water and looked around blurry eyed until Waterfall’s face came into view above me.
“She’s back!”
I took in what was happening around me and realised just what had happened, someone did come get me out, which meant that Bomb performed CPR seeing as she was the one above my face. I made my hand into a fist and punched her right in the face, causing her nose to start bleeding immediately, dripping blood all over me.
“What did I tell you!?”
Bomb was smiling anyway through all the bleeding, she didn’t care, I was back. “It was worth it.”
“I specifically told you that if you ever gave my CPR I was going to punch you in the face.”
“I don’t care.”
“Well then have fun with your bloody face.”
“I will.”
I looked around, further examining the scene around me, finding them all staring at me, the guys all wore confused faces, and Raven was soaked.