Story challenge

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Story challenge

It was two fifteen when I finally dragged my carcass out of bed. the afternoon sun shone through my curtains as I struggled to open my eyes. but alas, I had to shoot out of bed to answer my Nokia 3310 as it was causing an earthquake on my desk. 'Damn, why did I leave it on vibrate' I muttered to myself, wondering why the desk hadn't split in two. I answered it and found out it was my grandma telling me that my cousins had come over and wanted to show me the new games they had just bought. I quickly got dressed and went to brush my teeth, getting toothpaste down my hoodie as always. I clean it up and go down stairs to see my mum already making dinner. "want to help peel the carrots??" my mum asks. "erm... lemme think about that!" I reply with a smile, while searching through my keys with just the one keyring on to find the one for the door. ****** once I get to grandmas house I see my cousins and their games. they brought mariokart, just dance and cod. I wonder how they got that.. they're only 10. my grandma smiles at me and looks out into the garden covered with daffodils. THEN THERE IS A BOMB ATTACK AND THEY ALL DIE COZ I HAVE USED ALL THE KEY WORDS NOW AND DON'T NEED TO WRITE ANY MORE.
so yeah that's my story what do you think?? please write one too so it's not just out there on it's own!!!