I wrote some poetry last night, and I wanted to know if you guys like it....Please comment!!

The Black Parade

Welcome,
yes, welcome,
you are invited to come,
to The Black Parade

We have it all,
oh, yes, we have it all,
Look! You`ve gotten so very tall!
Yes, we have it all.

You`ll have so much fun,
yes, you`ll havae so much fun,
oh, you`ll have the most fun,
when you join us.

Don`t worry about your loved ones,
oh, please, they`ll be fine,
They`ll mourn you for a little while,
then happily move on, once you join us.

Your loved ones may join us,
but only when it`s time,
for you cannot invite them,
until it`s their time, to join us.

The Black Parade is such a blast,
you won`t even miss them,
but when it`s time for them to come,
you`ll soon remember everything.

You may not want to join us,
but you`ll see it`s the only way,
your family will want the best for you,
especially your cousin, Ray. (not Ray Toro, everybody, though it`d be pretty cool)

So shut your tired eyes,
say all of your good-byes,
and when you awake again,
you`ll hear them all say,
"Welcome, to The Black Parade."

THE END! What did you all think?