A letter to You

A LETTER TO YOU
If I were to feel the loss of the 150,000 people that died today,
it would still be nothing in comparison to when I knew I lost you.
A halo of red now remains,
Your fading eyes burning into mine.
Do you remember you told me you loved me?
No?
You don't?
Of course you don't.
You're dead now.

Okay so I wrote this poem. Tell me what you think, I hope it's not too crappy.