So I've started coming up with ideas for a comic I might make, but before I actually do it I'd maybe like some feedback/constructive criticism to make it as good as it can be. I'd be really grateful, so just give me your thoughts! The pic is a charecter plan of one of the main charecters, and his superhero name thingy is Necro, because he has power over darkness and shadows and stuff. :D
The plot is kind of Danger Days inspired, so yea.
The basic plot is in an alternate universe when you're born, you're brain is blanked so you can just devote your entire life to working for an evil government thingy (which are only ever referred to as 'the Government'). The problem is, in very rare incidents, some people have a gene that makes the resistant to the drug that blanks your brain. If this happens, the resistant people can develop powers from the drug, so the government locks up these resistant humans.
All is well for the government until one day 4 of the resistant humans (who are all about 18-25) manage to escape and run away, where they meet a scientist trying to cure the blanked humans. This scientist and a group of rebels all live in a hide out thingy where they constantly try (and fail) to overthrow The Government. The rebels believe they can use these 'super humans' to overthrow The Government, and from there the story continues.....
SO SHOULD I TRY TO WRITE THIS??? THOUGHTS PLEEASE!!!! <3 I'd be really grateful.
Also, do you guys have any title ideas? Thank you! :)
