random poetry

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random poetry

So here's some random poetry I thought up one all too sunny sunday afternoon. please let me know if it's any good or what I can do to make it better. any comments will be greatly appreciated! :)

Ink of the Night.
The midnight moon rises,
Laying its inky fingers on the land below it,
Tearing the soft innocents of the night,
Away as one would the web of a spider,
Carelessly,
without consequence,
The echoes of an organ play,
Penetrating the empty silence of an overgrown graveyard,
As the midnight moon drips its inky fingers of existence,
All across the land it resides over.