LOOK ALIVE (sunshine!)

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LOOK ALIVE (sunshine!)

I NEED ADVICE!!!!!

I'm gonna start writing a proper FanFic and i need help. I'm not the best at describing stuff and i would like some tips.
This is for a Revenge kinda FF set in either WWII OR School.

ANY IDEAS?

Ps the title was because it's playing on TV