Song I wrote called waking up 'cause I couldn't sleep What do you guys think?

Waking Up

And what if I was,
what if I was living in the hell I've dreamed?
Walking dead between the living.
Then I'd warp myself in angels' wings every night
and shut this hell off me.
And when it starts playing
I hear the angels' voices
What if I was, if I was dreaming?
Escaping from a more horrible lie.
Angels dressed in black,
Angels shunned.
And when I hear their voices,
I turn,
I know they saw my life
I know they saved my life
And sometimes
I get a glimpse of their faces
But their light burns me alive
You're never going to be one of them
And what if I was,
what if I was living in the hell I've dreamed?
Walking dead between the living.
Then I warp myself in angels' wings every night
and shut this hell off me.
And when it starts playing
I hear the angels' voices
And what if I was,
what if I was living in the hell I've dreamed?
Walking dead between the living.
What if I was, if I was dreaming?
Escaping from a more horrible lie.
Warp myself, every night
In angels wings, shut this hell off me
Walking dead, dressed in black
A more horrible lie, the angels' voices
Escaping the hell I've dreamed
Escaping the lights that burn me alive
Never going to be one of them
Never going to, going to
what if I was living in the hell I've dreamed? (Walking dead between living)
What i if I was dreaming? (Escaping a more horrible lie)
Would pulling this gun,
This gun to my head,
Wake me up?