new song called Empty Promises Broken trust (tell me what you think)

tell me what you think i love to hear any opions on the song or any imprvment you think it need thanks pleas comment

you said you'd be thier
but you never were.
You promised you'd stay
But i whached you leave that night.

You put the knife to my throat
your hands stained red with my blood and trust

The trust i gave you, you broke when you leaft
the love i gave you. you throught it wasy like trash

You said you'd be thier
but you never were
You'd promises you'd stay
But i whaced you leave that night

My blood runs to your feet, But you just stand thier
You do nothing but stair

Your empty promises hurt me
your empty love has klled me

You said you be thier but you never were
You'd promise me you'd stay but i whaced you leave.