Song thingy I wrote...

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Song thingy I wrote...

I've been writing songs a lot more lately I just wrote this one so I kinda want feedback. It's kinda of random and weird but I love it. It started TOTALLY different than how it ended up, and the entire point of it changed. I must say though that it comes with a pretty creepy tune to it. Thanks, and I trust you all to keep your sticky paws to yourself. :)

And I'm sorry,
for letting my heart beat this long
And this song goes out
to the ones who weren't strong,
to the ones who weren't...

Ever think that your life passes right by?
Ever feel like you may die today (tonight?)
every single day?
any single way?
Any day that you just couldn't breathe

But I found a helpful alternative
it's temporary,
but it does a pretty fine job!
Won't you join me here?
I know, I've gone MAD!
I've gone simply, simply,
MAD!
I've been like this all day
all day,
EVERYDAY!

I wouldn't let my heart beat if I were you
I've gone crazier than you'd ever think possible
And I won't be back to sanity,
anytime soon
Why is death so appealing these days?
Am I just gonna die anyways?
(NO!)

It's not contagious
not courageous
just a little bit...
(ohhooohhhoooo...)
just a little bit...
(ohhooohhhoooo...)
Just a little bit...
(oh, oh, oh, oh....)

*long instrumental*

I'm sorry I let my heart beat this long
I won't waste another second being in the wrong
and this song goes out
to the ones who weren't strong!

I am not strong!
I am not strong!
I am not strong!
I'M INSANE!

*ahem*.... how is it?