Feed back Please - this song important to me-

( i wanted to put this on my demo but i wanted it to be strong song)

All passes denials caved deep in to my skin
Just victim of a reflection

Crawling in my skin
Redemption is a thing of the pasted
Something always taken away from
Not strong enough to wear this mask

I burred all my bridge a thousand time before
Not strong enough to play this part

There no going back from
All the monster I have been
Living on Shatter faith