The difference between running and living (fan fic part 1)

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The difference between running and living (fan fic part 1)

hey guys i want to try a fan fic and im not sure if im doing some thing wrong or right so plz let me know. :)
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Run. Running. Thats all I ever did. Thats all I ever knew. Feet puonding against the desert ground, lungs turning to fire quickly, and people in white suits shooting at me because they want to "experiment" on me more. I have 27 scars in total from it. And i sure as hell am not getting a 28. What did I do wrong? What did I do to deserve this? All I ever did was run. But now, Im running away.
My light white dress makes me go faster but me feet hurt because im not wearing shoes. I have three guns tied on me somehow, a bow and arrows, light armor under my dress, and a sword. I would love to shed all of it but I cant. I need them. The vampire people behind me are shooting at me with laser guns, I whipped out one of mine and killed one of the three, trying not to waste bullets. Who are they and why are they chasing me? And since when do I know how to use a gun?
The desert is beautiful. The vampire people gave up awhile ago but Im still running. I look around and see a white masked person hanging around a rock and I quickly run faster. He follows me and I just keep running. He shot me in the leg with a laser, causing me to scream. Got to keep going Marie, comon, you can do it. I came to a road and slowed down. I cant do it, who am i kidding. Just kill me already. then..
Bam. Lights out. got my wish granted.
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( Party Poisons POV)

I was taking a joy ride with Kobra Kid and Fun Ghoul( Jet Star hung back with Missile Kid) when I saw this beautiful thing come running across the road. And I couldnt stop. Kobra started yelling to stop but I couldnt, the brake was stuck. of all the days. The car hit the person and the person rolled up the hood of the car and when the brake finally kicked in, rolled back down to the ground.
"Holy...." began Fun Ghoul but stopped when Kobra yelled out " Drac!!"
I whipped my head around and shot the thing dead in the chest before he could touch the person. Wait, since when am I that over protective?
After the Drac was dead I hopped out the car and ran to help the guy followed by Kobra and Fun. That guy had the most weapons we ever seen, and scars. We flipped him over and saw that it was...A girl?!?! And... besides all the cuts on her face and hair covering it, she was the most beautiful thing Ive ever seen.
"Holy....." started Fun again.
"Would you stop saying that!?" I shouted at him. " Come on, we need to get out of here. Ill clean up her wounds in the car." I picked her up gently bridal style, not letting anyone else touch her, and walked to the back seat of the car for more room.
" Kobra, you drive." I said, causing them both to stare at me, jaws down. I was the only one who drove the car.
" She's dying!!!" I yelled from the back seat, causing them to stumble into the car. Kobra fumbled getting the car started but we quickly started moving after a while. I looked down at the girl and gently push the hair out of her face and dislodging all the weapons off her.
" What the hell is that?" Fun asked, pointing at a stick with string and other stick with metal tips.
" I have no idea. But I bet she knows." I said, not caring less about the weapons but the girl. I tried to get her layed out and comfortable when I saw all the cuts and scars. God, what did they do to her? Bruises and a laser shot inn her leg, her feet were all torn up and dusty, her arms covered in needle pointed cuts and scars, and a cut on her cheek that we just gave her.
" Speed it up!! Shes shot!" I yelled. Hang in there please, for me? I thought.
" Dude I m already flooring it." He answered.
" So what do you think the Dracs wanted with her so bad, I mean, I have never seen anyone tht bad. She must have something. And those weapons..." Fun whistled. " Havent seen anything lik tht in.... well i havnt."
" And shes female, thts what the rarest." Kobra said, " They dont usually care about the women, just lock em up to give birth to more men."
That struck a chord. " Just go!!" I yelled, spying the Diner around the bend.
" Alright, alright. were here." Kobra said. We parked the car and I brought the girl inside forgetting about the weapons. I ignored everyones comments and brought her to my bedroom and layed her down. Jet came in and whistled.
" Shes banged up alright. But, I think I can fix her. Just need to wind her back up again." He said, and I was grateful. Missile Kid and everyone came in.
" Its a girl." Dr. D said, " Thats rare."
" Thats what I said!" Kobra exclaimed, glad someone agreed with him.
" Shes pretty." Missile said which just broke my heart.
" Just get her fixed up alright?" I said, my voice cracking, and turned to Jet.
"Course. Everyone leave. I need to work my magic." Jet said and raised his arms like he was jesus. Everyone filled out and Ilingered a bit, not wanting to go.
"She'll be fine, Party." Jet said, knowing something was up with me and this girl. I just nodded and left, unknowing what to do. I have never felt this way with andyone. Is that a good thing?
" You alright? "Fun asked.
" I have no idea." I answered honestly. "I really dont"
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long I know, but I just needed everything out there. plz tell me if there are quirks needed to be changed. :)

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