hateful mask( improved version)

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hateful mask( improved version)

thanks for the comment
and i changed the first part
what do you think of it?
criticisms are welcome here

are you numb or just blind?
why aren't you noticing?
how can't you see
my masking hate?

been played for nothing
have betrayed by everything
my love for you
has turned into never ending hate

hate for being a fool
regret for giving a chance
hurt for even loving you
and sorrow for my innocence

that you took away like trash
leaving me dirty and broken
behind this smiling face
i wish you goodluck

for hell will sort you out
along with other traitors
liars and frauds like you
until the dying day, i promise you