Why I Cry

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Why I Cry

I just wrote this song very, VERY quickly, and I'd like to know what you guys think. It's sad, but the tune I have in my mind is quite pretty and...nice. So...yeah, please tell me what you think? It would mean a lot :)
PS: Currently crying while listening to The World Is Ugly... I promised myself I'd never listen to it again until it's released (cos it makes me cry, NOT cos I don't like it! It's amazing) but apparently that's too hard...

On the coldest night in the middle of summer
Somebody here is waiting for me to go
Because I told them I would be gone
So very soon
In the darkest room on the brightest day
The only one who cares is going away
Because I told them I didn't love them
Any more
Because this is why I cry today
And maybe every other single day
I am alive
With you
And you know that I've cried today
But now it's time to go to sleep I'll say
There's nothing I
Can do
On the last week of the year I died in
Everyone was waiting to go to bed
So I will rest
My weary head
Oh
And I know you will all still be here all the same
While I'm standing in the driest rain
But there are still tears
To shed
I know that you know I'm leaving
And there's nothing you can say
Before I let it go again
But this is the final last time
And if you want to come that's fine
I can leave you behind
Because this is why I cry today
And maybe every other single day
I am alive
With you
And you know that I've cried today
But now it's time to go to sleep I'll say
There's nothing I
Can do
And would you sad me now?
From myself and from the crowd
While I'm staring into the mist
Missing all those things I've missed
Yeah could you save me now?
And make another vow
Well I don't think you could see it through
Because this is why I cry today
And maybe every other single day
I am alive
With you
And you know that I've cried today
But now it's time to go to sleep I'll say
There's nothing I
Can do
Whisper softly in my ear
It's the last thing I will hear
So long as we will be defeated
It's the last thing I will hear
Comforts gentle, in my ear
It's the last thing in my ear
The end makes the cycle
Completed
Because this is why I cry today
And maybe every other single day
I am alive
With you
And you know that I've cried today
But now it's time to go to sleep I'll say
There is nothing
It's the last thing I will hear
It's the last thing I will hear
It's the last thing I will hear
I've got nothing else
To do