LEt Us see If I"M suck Or ROcks

Hello fellow killjoys I am making a song I titled it Jerris Song it's a kind of a love song this is about my ex-girlfriend because we went through a tough breakup and I wanted to see if it sucks or it rocks pls. post a comment If it sucks or it rocks...

Jerris Song

I love to see her smile
And I love to see her laugh
She's buying all of my antics
She's so happy to be with me
Were both young
But were playing our love story
Like beautiful married couple

Chorus:

Jerri where are you
Jerri I'm falling in pieces
oh Jerri
I love you Forever

Did she remember the first time
We kiss.
And I was touched by that magic.
And did she remember the day I promise
I'll never let her go
She was holding my hands
And started to cry
Because of the words I say

Chorus:

Jerri where are you
Jerri I'm falling in pieces
Oh Jerri
I love you,Forever
And I miss you
I need you so bad
I miss you
I need you so bad

Hope you all like it