BULLET IS THE METAL OF LOVE

I wrote a brand new song this is just the 1st verse and the chorus I hope you all like the lyrics.....

1st:
I give my ammunition to you
I hope it will save you
I give all the pills that I have
I'll tell all my secrets to you
Just to make you sleep

Chorus:

I'm seeking for my beautiful revenge
I'm falling from the sky
Shot all my enemy
Bullets is all I need
I don't need your love
I only need is your guts

SO WHAT CAN SAY?