Give me your opinion!

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Give me your opinion!

I know that is cheese because I wrote it for my crush and please give me your opinion.

Lie me
Bring me down
All I know could be fake

Save me
Take me out
All you know could be true

I get lost on your eyes
Because they shine so bright
With your smile you hipnotize
I think it's just from my mind

I can't denied it anymore
I get lost anytime more
The hole of my chest is closed
Can you find the meaning of my words?

Ok that's the song, is not finished yet but I think I exaggerated a little bit but OPINIONS PLEASE!