pass

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pass

i made this song a few days ago and sung it to my mom and she dndnt like it and gave me this huge speech and it pissed me off that i dndnt finish it but the song is about a girl who's husband gets killed and at first she's really depressed than she realizes she likes the pain and she wants to feel it agan and its a really good,and i wanna know what you guys think of it,its called 'pass'

i saw the clouds move in
i heard the thunder roar
i felt the earth move
and i cried when i lost you
i urged for more pain
i love the feel of tears
i kept it to my heart
and i never let it part
the knife felt so great
as i tore away my flesh
the best thing for me to do is
lose again
because it helps me
fall asleep at night
i burned myself by the light of your kiss
*chours*
now its time to pass on now
time to cut out your heart
now its time to pass on now
time to burn down the town with my soul
*verse 2*
i riped out my veins
wrote your name in the blood
looking at the pictures
helps it settle in
craving injections in my skin
while slicing my fingertips
brings back the memory of your lips
now its time to pass on now
time to cut out your heart
now its time to pass on now
time to burn the town with my soul

i will never let go
(i will keep you close)
(x4)

what can i do
when there is nothing for me
what can i do
now that i am lost
where will i go
when my heart slows a beat
what will i do
when my feet slip away

and thats all