another song I wrote, please tell me what you think? it's called Tonight In The Dark

Tonight is the night
let's take out all the fright
we could have had it all
let's whisper in the dark tonight.

Let's sing to the world
and dance to the wind
the world is ours tonight
let's make it worth our fight!

Just me and you are here
sitting at the edge
the river is ours
let's whisper in the dark tonight

down, down in the deep
were the hallows weep
we share a glance
were we lost our chance

Let's whisper in the dark tonight
lets whisper
lets whisper

fly with the wind
the night is at it's end
the sun comes up as we drown
the river is ours
as we whisper the night away.