A Sound Soul Part 2! Please tell me what you think?

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A Sound Soul Part 2! Please tell me what you think?

A girl with red and black hair walked slowly into the school, looking around slowly. She held her hands tightly to her side, afraid of the stares that she could have gotten. She walked around, and saw a girl, with black hair with blue tips sitting in a corner by herself. She was watching around at the people, with a thin book in her hand. The girl with the red hair walked over to the blue haired girl.
“Hey, I'm Magnolia War. It's my first day. Who are you?” she said.
“Hey! Can I call you War?” the girl asked.
“Sure....?” War asked.
“Cool. I'm Violet Justice. You can call me Vi, kay?” She asked.
“Awesome. You a weapon?” She asked.
“Yep! You a master?” Vi asked.
“No.” War laughed. “I'm a weapon.”
“Nice!” Vi said, fist bumping War. They both grinned, and watched the people milling about together. Soon, a boy with black hair that was longer walked in with a girl with long black hair. They walked in stride.
“That's Karmen and Gerard. Although she calls him Pyro.” Vi said, to War's curious stare.
“Why Pyro?” War asked.
“He's a flaming scythe.” Vi said, with a sideways glance and a shudder.
“You don't like fire?” War asked.
“No! Well, yeah. Kinda. I was born in a water clan.” Vi said. She sat up and looked around at the people around her. They were all staring at the door again. In was walking a boy who was quite short, and had his hair in a mohawk with bangs hanging in front of his face. He was walking in alone, but everyone stared at him.
“GREETINGS, PEOPLE!” He was yelling.
“What's he all about?” War asked, feeling her soul stir looking at him.
“I AM, OF COURSE, THE STAR OF THE SHOW!” The boy yelled. Vi scoffed and rolled her eyes.
“Wow, he's full of it.” She said.
“I think it's kinda cute.” War giggled. Vi stared at her for a moment, then shook her head, looking around at the school again. Then, she found a boy with a brown afro staring at her with a weird look. She looked away for a moment, to see if anyone was around her, then looked back, but the boy had disappeared. She shook her head, disturbed, before seeing War blushing as the boy was coming closer to them.
“If you want to say hi, say hi.” Vi said, smirking.
“I can't!” War said, blushing deeper.
“He's not a real celebrity, trust me. It's not like he's in a huge rock band, or anything.” Vi said, casually. The boy saw War blushing and immediately came her way. She backed up closer to Vi, who stepped away.
“Well, well, well.” The boy said, grinning at War. “Looks like I have my first fan!” He said, laughing, and grabbed her in a huge hug. She gasped as he swung her around, and flushed.
“Can't.....breathe....” She gasped. The boys stopped laughing, and set her down. Then he reached into his back pocket and pulled out a sharpie. He grabbed her arm and wrote his name down with a flourish.
“I'm Fran Iero, and I'm happy to have you as my first fan! Welcome to my fan club!” He said, grinning at her. She blushed again.
“Uh....thank you?” She said, questioningly.
“Say....do you want to be my weapon? I'm a master, and I really need a weapon, so I can beat everyone else! Let's do it!” He said, holding out his hand. She blushed and took it, and Frank started dragging her along, saying, “I have a huge photo collection of me! You have to see it!”
Vi laughed and shook her head. “Crazy kids.” She muttered.