Song Chorus. Which one to do ?

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Song Chorus. Which one to do ?

3rd November 2009

Heyy, it's me again (:

I has to write a song. I had a few ideas for titles, but I wrote the chorus-ish for a couple. I have:

Revealed:
I tried to stay hidden, protection all around,
But walls I built to hide myself
Have now come crumbling down
My protection broken, I stumble to the ground
No longer lost, or hidden,
But found.

Star on the horizon:
You’re the star on the horizon
Something for me to fix me eyes on
When the skies are grey and you’re gone
I know you’re there still waiting behind them.

Which should I pursue ?

Or should i pursue the other titles:
Nothing's Impossible But You
A Figment Of My Overactive Imagination
Lost In Your Lie (struggling with this one right now)

Any comments or improvements would be lucky. I know you all are creative, smart people. Why else would you like MCR ? xD

Tchao

Comments

I like how A Figment Of My Overactive Imagination sounds, but so far Star On The Horizon sounds cool.

I think you should stay working on all of them but my favorite right now is Revealed so cool that your writing your own songs.
XO

I like how Revealed is sounding ;)