A little taste of what's to come

So! I'm beginning to actually sing my songs! Here is a Live song me and my friends wrote (I only wrote/sang the bridge), i'm the kid with the long black hair
Soon we will be recording a song that i wrote and i'm really looking forward to it, but here's a taste of my voice, please give me some feedback, some constructive criticism on how to improve my voice (going for the Heath Ledger's Joker in Dark Knight mixed with Gerard Way sound), again i'm the one with long black hair

Also, SHOUT OUT- To PAYER my friend's (the other two guys) band (They're helping me with the song we'll be recording soon) and they already have a lot of AWESOME MOTHER FUCKING music on youtube, check em out, again they're called PAYER, Check 'em out:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V1hRehDP8PE

Link to our Live show:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jDZaH0cfeeg