ROAR

i am writing a story with atomic explocion to show how mcr's music can help people though hard things. it's fiction it never happened. it's about a girl named riley who loves mcr and she wants to be famous and her sister dies of cancer, her mom is murdered, her best friend comits suiside, her dad abondons her and is hit by a bus which hit her dog who ate her cat who ate her hamster that her best friend that comited suiside gave and the bus driver is her boyfriends dad. then she goes blind. then she becomes somewhat famous. then she get's an email from mcr and the finally agree to meet her. on the way to meet them she is hit by the bus and she dies with a winning lottery tickit in her pocket. this is also not sopospe to be happy. but thru it all she has mcr's music to keep her going. does anyone have any thought's on what would make it more depressing or how i'm going to get them to see it when it's don't?