chapter 24:) please read and give me some feed back guys.

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chapter 24:) please read and give me some feed back guys.

Party Poison’s P.O.V. (24)
Today had been one long ass day. We all had loads of work we did and none of us had any fun with it. But now at least we had all gotten a chance to shower.
“Party!!!” Jet smiled and waved his hand infront of my face. “Anyone home in there?” Jet continued to wave his hand and I slaped it away. Jet smiles at me I and glare. “Oh Party stop.” A sweet voice dirfted my way. I looked to see Misery sitting down next to me. “Were lucky, tonight Kobra and Rose are making us dinner since we worked all day long.” We all smile as Kobra and Rose carry in plates with lazana on it. “There wasn’t much to work with but we did find the ingrediants for lanzana.” Rose smiles and her and kobra handed us all out plates. They walked into the kitchen and then back out with there food. I took a fork full and smiled. “Great guys, it tastes great! Thanks for making us diner!” Rose and Kobra smiled and started to eat.
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We had all loved the diner Rose and Kobra made. And most of us were stuffed to. It felt nice to actually have a full stomach for once, to be able to say im full and not hungry. Misery came and sat on my lap and I laughed “Whattya doing silly?” Misery giggled and twisted a piece of my red hair. “Such a nice shade of red.” Misery smiles at me.”Ha ha thanks.” She smiled and pushed me down onto the bed. “Whoa!” I said without thinking and she laughs. Misery crawled up ontop of me and rested her head on my chest.
“NO!!!” I heard Ghoul scream. Misery jumped up and pulled me into the main room. Misery burst into tears and ran to crying Ghoul who was leaned over a passed out Acid. “What the hell happened?” I ran over to ghoul. “He stabbed her!!!” Ghoul cried as Kobra and Jet pryed Acid out of his hand and put her in the car. They sped off towards zone 4 where Fadded Moon and Wicked Fire would help them. I knelt down and hugged Misery and Ghoul. “Come on you to need to go rest. Ill stay up and wait for any news.” Misery hugged me tight and gave me a kiss, and then she walked off to our room. “Korse.” Ghoul whispered. I nodded and helped him stand. He was covered in Acids blood. “Party, do you think shes gone for good?” Ghoul asked as I helped him to his room. “No. I believe that she will be fine.” Ghoul nodded and sat on his bed. “Night man.” Ghoul said as I walked out and shut the door. If Acid died not only would I have to help Ghoul with a crushed heart but I would have to take care of misery.