I didn't change it much, but I re wrote some of the lyrics and took out some and I even CAME UP WITH A MELODY I AM SO HAPPY BECAUSE I'VE NEVER WRITTEN A SONG BEFORE! With a melody anyway.....
Anyway tell me whatcha think :D
I'm trying
I'm fighting
Again and again
That you love me
You need me
I swear I can pretend
Your mine, baby
My next victim
Don't try and hide
I'll die with you
At least on the inside
Well honey, I'm trying
I'm burning again
Covered in acid
Consider them friends
Some pain must be nice
Right about now
I'd live if I could
Figure out how.
Can you tell me
Whats so wrong
About the jokes I'm making?
Cause my laughter is real
Trust me, babe, I'm not faking
And in the end
You'll be hysterical with me
While the police are left bleeding
Well honey, I'm trying
I'm burning again
Covered in acid
Consider them my friends
Some pain must be nice
Right about now
I'd live if I could
Figure out how.
Have you noticed my heart
Still isn't beating
And have you noticed, honey
This scene just keeps repeating
And it won't stop
Not now, not ever
Til I make you mine
Now and forever
Well honey, I'm trying
I'm trying so hard
To not dead or behind bars
But my hearts still not beating
And no airs in this chest
And I'm still not sleeping
And I won't get any rest
I'm trying
I'm trying
Honey I'm trying so hard
But I can't forget
With all these beautiful scars
And I'm running
I'm running
I'm trying so hard!
