The best thing about poison is that it never talks back (so....i wrote a thing....)

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The best thing about poison is that it never talks back (so....i wrote a thing....)

I was digging through my old documents and I found this old song that I had written on a whim while I was sick and was on way too many meds....uhh...yeah. I wrote it last year, and though it's really not my best, I don't think it's TOTALLY horrible. I'd like your guys' opinion on it, though. Things that can be improved and such :3

Here:

When will they make a medication
Exactly for your situation
Cause you've got me on my knees
Choking down pills in two's in threes
There's not enough cough syrup for me to take
To get me on my feet
Wide and awake
And there's not enough medicine for me to swallow down
So I'll give up that fight
And do another round
Of everything in the medicine cabinet
I don't care what it is
As long as I have it
This sure as hell ain't the best for me
But if this is where I'm starting
It's what I'm gonna end up to be
I tried to quit when you asked me
But I need the haze so I can sleep
Unless you want me up all night
Unless you want me to give up the fight
There's not enough cough syrup for me to take
To get me on my feet
Wide and awake
And there's not enough medicine for me to swallow down
So I'll give up that fight
And do another round
Of everything in the medicine cabinet
I don't care what it is
As long as I have it
This sure as hell ain't the best for me
But if this is where I'm starting
It's what I'm gonna end up to be
I'd kill for you
And I'd die for you
But the plastic bottles ask nothing of me
I'd lie for you
And I'd cry for you
But the small little capsules ask nothing of me
I'd beg for you
I'd fight for you
But the plastic bottles ask nothing of me
I'd kill for you
I'd die for you
BUT ALL OF THIS POISON ASKS NOTHING OF ME
There's not enough cough syrup for me to take
To get me on my feet
Wide and awake
And there's not enough medicine for me to swallow down
So I'll give up that fight
And do another round
Of everything in the medicine cabinet
I don't care what it is
As long as I have it
This sure as hell ain't the best for me
But if this is where I'm starting
It's what I'm gonna end up to be
(Help me end this
Help me end this
I need to quit
I need to quit)
BUT ALL OF THIS POISON ASKS NOTHING OF ME.