I recently joined deviantart, literally 20 mins ago, and searched up MCR groups, this popped up.
Personality
Is your character:
[X] Feisty?
[ ] Quick to lose her temper?
-[ ] But only when it's justified?
[ ] Witty?
[X] Fearless?
[X] Rebellious?
[ ] Cunning?
[X] A quick thinker?
[ ] Highly intelligent?
[X] Tough as nails?
[X] Powerful?
[_] Stubborn?
[X] Mysterious?
[_] Loud and talkative?
[_] Pessimistic?
[_] Wise?
[X] Someone who "doesn't take any crap"?
What are your character's talents?
[X] Aiming and shooting
[X] Hitting and kicking
[ ] Blowing things up or setting them on fire
[ ] Using mysterious superpowers
-[ ] For reasons never explained
[ ] Lying and manipulating people
[X] Drawing dark artwork or writing dark poetry
[X] Singing/playing music
[ ] Anything and everything
[X] Does she/he acquire new talents quickly and easily?
Does your character:
[ ] Curse frequently?
[ ] Drink, smoke, or use drugs?
-[ ]Without any negative effects?
[X] Are her flaws all minor ones? (i.e. "she smokes," "she's clumsy," "she's a bit opinionated")
-[ ] So minor that no one even notices?
-[ ] Or do people notice, but they think her flaws are adorable or charming?
[X] Is her personality similar to (or exactly like) Party Poison's, Kobra Kid's, Fun Ghoul's, or Jet Star's?
Your total: 15
Physical Appearance
Does your character:
[ ] Wear revealing clothing?
-[ ] Even when it would be impractical? (For example, you wouldn't want to fight Dracs in a bikini top.)
[X] Weigh so little that she should look like a skeleton, but doesn't?
-[X] Is she extremely shapely and curvy despite her weight?
[X] Always have perfect hair and/or makeup?
-[X] Even if it would be impractical or impossible?
[ ] Wear lots of fancy jewelry?
-[ ] Even when it would be impractical?
Even if she rarely bathes, does your character:
(Ignore these if she actually does bathe from time to time.)
[X] Never get filthy and smelly?
[X] Never get hairy (from lack of shaving)?
[X] Never sweat, no matter how much time she spends in the sun?
[ ] Have clear and flawless skin?
[X] Is she beautiful?(I guess)
-[ ] Is she famous for her beauty?
-[ ] Are other characters jealous of her beauty?
-[ ] Is she frequently praised for her looks?
-[ ] Do other people fall in love with her because of her beauty?
-[ ] Do you describe her beauty in great detail, and/or describe it frequently?
Do her eyes:
[X] Have strange qualities? (i.e. slit pupils, change color according to mood, etc.)
[ ] Have an unusual color?
[X] Have a piercing, haunting, or intense stare?
[X] Is her outfit similar to (or exactly like) Party Poison's, Kobra Kid's, Fun Ghoul's, or Jet Star's?
[ ] Do you (or other characters) use poetic words and phrases to describe your character's appearance?
Your total: 11
Relationships
[X] Is your character liked or loved by all the canon characters you like?
[ X] Or if a character dislikes her, is that person someone whose opinion doesn't matter? (Member of BL/ind, whiny brat, jerk, etc.)
-[ X] Is this character killed, injured, or humilated?
--[ X] By your Killjoy?
-[ ] Or does he or she eventually learn to love your Killjoy?
[X] Is more than one person in love with your character?
-[ ] More than three?
Is your character:
[ ] Related to Party Poison, Kobra Kid, Fun Ghoul, or Jet Star?
-[ ] More than one? (The Way brothers count as one.)
[X] Dating Party Poison, Kobra Kid, Fun Ghoul, or Jet Star?
-[ ] More than one?
[ ] A close friend of Party Poison, Kobra Kid, Fun Ghoul, or Jet Star?
-[ ] More than one?
Is your character dating, related to, or close to:
[ ] Dr. Death Defying?
[ ] Show Pony?
[ ] The little girl?
[ ] Korse?
[ ] NewsAGoGo?
[ ] Does your character convince two of the MCR boys to start dating each other?
-[ ] Do they credit her with starting their relationship?
-[ ] If the last one applies, do they gush about her more than they gush about each other?
[ ] Does she claim to be gay or bisexual but is never actually attracted to the same sex?
Your total: 6
Killjoy Life
[ ] Does she know Party Poison, Kobra Kid, Fun Ghoul, and Jet Star?
(This refers to knowing them personally. Seeing their faces in the newspaper doesn't count.)
If she knows Party Poison, Kobra Kid, Fun Ghoul, and Jet Star:
[ ] Is she more skilled than they are at something?
-[ ] Is she more skilled than they are at everything?
[ ] In comparison to your character, do the boys look weak, stupid, worthless, bad, etc.?
[ ] Has she gotten them out of trouble?
-[ ] With no help from other Killjoys?
-[ ] Does this happen frequently?
[ ] Has she saved one of their lives?
-[ ] More than one?
[ ] Do they frequently praise her and/or have special "pet names" for her?
[X] Do they get furious when someone threatens her?
[ ] Do the boys spend more time with her than they do each other?
-[ ] Do they care about her more than they care about each other?
-[ ] Do they fight for her attention?
[ ] Is she the only Killjoy allowed to associate with them?
[ ] Are other Killjoys jealous of her association with the boys?
[ ] Are the boys the only people who truly understand her?
[X] Does she share many of their tastes and hobbies?
[X] Did they teach her everything she knows, or at least a great deal?
[ ] Has she taught them important skills and/or life lessons?
If she's especially close to one of the MCR boys in particular:
[ ] Does she ignore the rest of the boys and/or regard them as unimportant?
-[ ] Even if they're just dying for her attention?
-[ ] Does he ignore the rest of the boys as well, so he can spend as much time as possible with your character?
-[ ] Do the rest of the boys look stupid, weak, or worthless compared to him and your character?
Regarding her work, is she:
[X] A fighter?
-[X] Is her weapon special or custom-made?
--[ ] So special that only she knows how to use it?
[ ] A radio station DJ?
[ ] A firestarter?
[ ] A double agent?
[X] The leader of part of the Killjoy rebellion?
-[ ] The leader of the whole damn thing?
In her line of work:
[ ] Is she rarely or never injured?
-[ ] Even in situations when most people would be? (i. e. "Mary Sue took out a thousand Dracs without getting a scratch!")
[X] If she has been injured or killed, was it because she did something heroic? (i. e. sacrificing herself to save someone else)
[ ] If she has been injured, does she have no scars?
-[X] Or if she does have scars, are they small and unnoticeable?
[X] Do her injuries make her look "tough" or "badass"? (like an X scratched over her eye)
-[ ] Do they make life better for her? (like a robotic arm with catlike reflexes)
[ ] Does your character take over the job of a canon character? (like, she takes over Dr. D's radio station)
-[ ] Permanently?
-[ ] Is she better at that job than the original character was?
When it comes to other Killjoys, not including the MCR boys:
[X] Is she better at what she does than most Killjoys?
-[ ] Better than all Killjoys?
-[X] Is she considered an expert and frequently asked for advice?
[X] Is she famous in the Killjoy world?
-[X] More famous than any other Killjoy?
[ ] Are other Killjoys jealous of/threatened by her talents?
[ ] Does she refuse to accept help from any other Killjoys?
[X] Is she wealthy for a Killjoy? (she has lots of fancy weapons and gadgets, she lives in a nice house, etc.)
-[ ] For reasons never explained?
Your total: 14
BL/ind
[X] Is your character a huge threat to BL/ind?
-[X] More than any other Killjoy?
[ ] Does BL/ind want her to join them, due to her amazing abilities?
[X] Has your character injured or killed an important member of BL/ind? (Not including Dracs.)
-[ ] Has she injured or killed Korse or NewsAGoGo?
[X] Has your character taken out more Dracs than you can count on one hand?
-[ ] A ridiculous number of Dracs? Like, an entire army of them.
-[ ] With no help from any other Killjoys?
If your character is a double agent:
[ ] Has she sabatoged something extremely important, like a major plan to destroy the Killjoys?
-[ ] Did she sabatoge it single-handedly?
[ ] Is she second-in-command to Korse, NewsAGoGo, or any other highly important figure?
-[ ] Is she higher than Korse, NewsAGoGo, or another important figure?
-[ ] Is she the head of BL/ind?
[ ] Does your character convince a member of BL/ind to join the good side?
-[ ] Is it a highly important figure like Korse or NewsAGoGo?
-[ ] If not, do they at least become a better person because of your character?
[X] If captured, is your character spared by BL/ind?
-[X] Even though they would kill or torture anyone else?
Your total: 2
Flaws and Original Ideas
**For every box you check, subtract one point from your total score.
Is your character:
[ ] Lazy or weak?
[ ] Inexperienced?
[ ] Obnoxious?
[ ] Unintelligent?
[ ] Selfish or greedy?
[ ] A coward?
[ ] Hateful?
[ ] Concieted?
[ ] Bratty and spoiled?
[ ] Violent?
[ ] Cruel?
[ ] Shallow?
[X] Deaf/blind/mute or otherwise physically disabled and has nothing to make up for it?*
[ ] Mentally disabled and has nothing to make up for it?
[ ] Mentally ill? (besides depression)
[ ] Does she have a phobia of some kind?
Is your character:
[ ] Sensitive?
[ ] Timid or shy?
[ ] Cheerful and optimistic?
[ ] Motherly and nuturing?
[ ] Does she hate death, destruction, and/or fighting?
[ ] Does she see the best in everyone (including BL/ind workers)?
[ ] Does she feel guilty when she injures or kills a member of BL/ind, including Dracs?
-[ ] Does she hate herself for doing so?
Regarding her physical appearance, is your character:
[ ] Unattractive?
[ ] Overweight?
[ ] Greasy/foul-smelling/etc.?
[ ] Old for a Killjoy? (older than a teenager or young adult)
[ ] Significantly deformed or scarred?
-[ ] On her face?
[ ] If you're female, is your character male?
[ ] If she drinks, smokes, or uses drugs, does it affect her life negatively?
[ ] Is her Killjoy name not related to death, destruction, poison, danger, darkness, pain, fighting, or rebelliousness?
-[X] Does her name have actual significance (instead of simply "sounding badass")?
[ ] Is her Killjoy outfit practical for her line of work? (i. e. a mechanic who wears overalls)
-[ ] Does she have no fancy outfit at all?
[X] Do you have a strong and logical backstory for your character?
-[ ] Does she actually think about her past?
-[X] Did it help create the person she is today?
If she knows other Killjoys, including the MCR boys:
[ ] Is she weak or inexperienced compared to them?
[ ] Is she disliked by some or all of them?
-[ ] Is she flat-out hated?
[X] Has she gotten them into trouble?
-[X] Did someone get injured or killed because of her?
-[X] Do people hate her for what happened?
-[X] Did someone have to save her?
[ ] Has she injured or killed a fellow Killjoy?
-[ ] More than one?
[ ] Does your character not know the MCR boys?
-[ ] If she knows them, does she dislike or hate them?
[ ] Is your character something besides the typical fighter? (Mechanic, scout, etc.)
-[ ] Does she have an unglamorous job, like cook, scavenger, etc?
[ ] If she has ever been seriously injured or killed, was she not playing the hero? (she didn't sacrifice herself or anything like that)
[ ] Does she support BL/ind?
-[ ] Is she a double agent who feeds BL/ind information about the Killjoys?
Your total: 7
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Number of Sue-ish traits: 56
Number of flaws/original ideas: 1
After subtracting the flaws/original ideas, your total is: 55
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Results
0-6
You're on the right track. Your character is probably not a Suejoy.
7-15
Not bad, just be cautious. Some creative thinking wouldn't hurt here.
16-25
Definitely sounding Sue-ish. You could still save this character, but it'll take some polishing.
26-35
At this point, you might want to start fresh with a new character. Your Killjoy could be too cliche to save.
36+
Start over.
Oh, whatever, I'm happy with what I got......What is sue? Well, I don't know, so please don't ask me bout it.
-Dynamic Deadbeat
