a quick song i wrote. please read?

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a quick song i wrote. please read?

this might be my best!!! and i suck at writing songs -_- but this is good!! it is yet to be titled though. maybe Crossroads? sounds good.
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What do have to live for?
When all your possessions are gone.
What do have to love?
When all their love is hate.

Tick, tick, tick.
Your life ticks away.
Tick, tick, tick.
They're crying for what you did.
Was it worth it?
Staring at a loaded gun?
Glaring at those colored pills?
Your bloody wrists undone?

There's a light in this tunnel.
There's a hope in this despair.
Floating on a cloud,
won't do you any good.

Tick, tick, tick.
Are you really sure?
Tick, tick, tick.
There is no turning back.
Did they mean it?
Those words that hurt you so.
Touching your frail body bruised.
Your salty tears are shed.

There's a light in this tunnel.
There's a hope in this despair.
Floating on a cloud,
won't do you any good.

Fly, fly, away.
Don't come back again.
Drip, drop, broken.
I need you here with me.
Why did I do it?
Staring at a loaded gun?
Glaring at those colored pills?
My bloody wrists undone?
*screams*

*silence*
Why..... why.... did.... I....
Why..... why.... did.... you....
......leave...... me here a-

*music enters again*
There's a light in this tunnel.
There's a hope in this despair.
Floating on a cloud,
won't do you any good.

I'm here for you!
Everyone was.
Forever with you soul,
give me your baggage.

You are not alone today.
Not ever.
Not alone anymore, anymore.
Not at all.

No fear, only friends.
No tears, only laughs.
They won't hurt you anymore.