The Black Parade poem

This is a poem I wrote using lyrics from different songs in The Black Parade and a few of my own lines mixed in there. Tell me what you think! :)

Now come one, come all, to this tragic affair,
Because without you is how I disappear.
Wipe off that makeup, what's in is despair,
The guilt we don't shed with every crystalline tear.
Do or die, you'll never make me,
I am not afraid to walk this world alone;
How could you cry for me?
Nothing you can say can stop me going home.
If life ain't just a joke
We're damned after all;
On this chaos I choke,
To return from the ashes you call.
Can you hear me cry out to you?
'Cause the hardest part of this is leaving you...