Suprise - Second Blog

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Suprise - Second Blog

So, yesterday, i posted my first blog. I didn't believe I'd write a second one. But due to the support of the blog's readers and the wonderful comments. I decided to post another one. Yesterday i attached one of my poems to the blog. And today i will attach another. Once again, i love feedback, positive or negative. I prefer the truth to any falsity designed to make me feel better. Anyway, i hope everyones had a good day and if not hopefully tomorrow will be better for you.

When you call out.
There’s no reply.
It stops you dead.
You wonder why.
It’s all for you.
All at you.
That’s what we do.
Bring you in.
Break you down.
Shed your skin.
Take your crown.
Your dependant.
Your depressive.
Your distraught.
And now.
Your destroyed.
You’ve lost who you were.
You’ve found who your not.
The security you once had.
The barriers you kept.
All gone now.
You went with the flow.
But where did it get you.
No where but backwards.
Your insecure.
Your weak.
I’m strong.
Your meek.
You’ll follow me.
You’ll follow us.
Off into eternity.
You need us.
We’re all you have.
All you’ll get.
If you leave now.
Live alone.
If you stay.
Die in company.
It’s up to you.
But the curtains calling.
You missed the cue.
Choose fast.
Draw quicker.
Stay down.
Euphorised by sweet liquor.
Sober up.
Come down.
You’ll miss what you had.
It was grand.
You’ll find it hard to stand.
Without your support.
Without your soul.
But you can join us.
On our desperate march.