Let me be the one to save you (#1)

I sat and watched the BLI cars roll by, Draculoids at the wheel of each one. Where were they going? As soon as they had gone out of my vision I ambled down to find Dr. Death and tell him about the Dracs, he has to warn the Killjoys, I have never seen so many Draculoids together like that.
“Dr.D! Dozens of Dracs down the west side of Battery City. All driving, none on foot, looked like they were in a hurry to get somewhere.” I stammered, trying to get the words out as quick as possible.
“I’ll broadcast it, Party Poison and Kobra Kid are around the west side too. I told them to keep their radios on, don’t worry, they will be fine.”
(This is my first ever FanFiction story thing, please can you comment on stuff I can improve and what was good and things like that?)
xoAmber